Showing posts with label Omid Olfet. Show all posts
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Thursday, January 4, 2018

D like Doll E like Evil Review

D like Doll E like Evil

By Omid Olfet

D like Doll E like Evil by [Olfet, Omid]
A story where a young boy embarks on an incredible journey alongside his doll, given to him by his mother. As the story progresses the history of the mysterious doll is revealed and throughout the story more and more is discovered about this unique toy. John loses connection with a meaningful person in his life, which is his Mom, because of the divorce. The story also contains scenes with several family members that provide a meaningful impact on John’s life. John admires some of these characters more than the others, but the one he shows absolutely no passion towards is his stepmother. He ends up moving in with his dad and his wicked stepmom. After a specific occurrence, he ends up not being able to talk and no one knows why. Every time he opens his mouth, gibberish comes out. His parents look into this mysterious problem, but no one can figure out the reason behind his disability. Several incidences throughout the story cause the little John to despise his stepmom more and more, thus eventually messing up the relationship with his dad. The stepmom’s tactics and strategies finally help her in succeeding to turn John’s own blood against him. This burning rage becomes instilled into John’s mind, causing him to make some irrational decisions towards his doll. As if the doll’s life was somehow intertwined with the stepmother’s, the same results rained down on his stepmom. The author manages to end the story with the reader knowing what happened but still having some questions.

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MY REVIEW

John’s life began with a bad start. His dad, Max, didn’t love his mom and wanted her to abort him. If not for Max’s mother changing his mind, little John might never have been born. From that point on, things only went downhill for John. His parents divorced and John ended up living with his dad and new stepmom, Sara. John’s mom, Mary, bought an antique doll and gave it to John. But Sara was highly jealous of John, and the doll only made matters worse. After the doll enters their life, everything changes for John, Max and Sara, and not for the good.


I really thought this would be a good read, despite the reviews. I did enjoy the story, and felt it had an interesting plot with believable characters. But that’s where it ends. The book was too short to be meaningful. The characters and plot were too rushed for me to connect. I feel the story should be expanded upon to give the characters a chance to show some personality. I also feel that the author will do well after more experience. His writing right now shows promise, but is elementary in relaying the story. To be fair though, the book seems to have been translated and that could be most of the problem.
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**The above opinions are 100% my own, whether I purchased the book or it was given to me to review.


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Sunday, November 5, 2017

The Castle Book Review

The Castle

By Onid Olfet

Devon was a five-year-old when he learned that those headaches he was having were the result of a cancerous tumor behind his eye. But thanks to his family and good doctors, he survived. Or did he? The Castle is the story of his reminiscences, especially of the crystal chess set he got as a gift after his surgery. But then one of the pieces fell to the floor and shattered. Which piece? The castle, or rook as some call it. Suddenly, Devon awakens in a strange land where he finds a real castle - and some of the same people he knew in his childhood. What is real and what is not? Is he alive or dead? It's a story that will keep you wondering.








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MY REVIEW

At five years old, Devin was diagnosed with a tumor, causing his vision to blur. His surgery was successful but there was no guarantee that the cancer would not come back. During the surgery, Devin saw a light. The light became a man who seemed very familiar to Devin. This man gave him a crystal chess set, and told Devin that it was special, as was he, and that in time he would understand why. Later, Devin’s grandfather gives him a chess set that was exactly like the one in his dream. After one of the pieces gets broken, Devin collapses and finds himself at a castle. How did he get there and how will he get back home?


This was a bizarre story. I couldn’t tell if Devin was actually dying or just dreaming everything. There were things that didn’t make sense to me, and other things that were out of place. For example, the time period for the story states around 1900, but a helicopter was mentioned matter-of-factly and they weren’t even invented until 1936. I could overlook all of that if the story had ended with a point made. But it didn’t. The author gave elementary writing style, but I feel that he could improve with experience.
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**The above opinions are 100% my own, whether I purchased the book or it was given to me to review.


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